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Feedback from the class

Trailer

• Music works well
• Writing is good
• Music is good
• The flashlight looks effective
• Good begining, good end
• Just need a faster, clearer middle
• Some more shorter shots from different angles while their in the house
• Maybe a scene where they take her hostage
• Needs a bit of the male at the begining
• 1.02 does not flow with continuity, cuts from light on to a different
• Voice over maybe to make it look more like a trailer
• Male laughing maybe?
• The bedroom scene could maybe be cut out altogether
• Start and end is brilliant, middle is a little bit of a let down for the piece-perhaps leave the 3 girls out an have the bits of main girl being watched as they are good aswell

Poster

• Overall really good
• At the top in the blank space maybe put the stalker pictures across the top all jizjazzed? or a quote. Space needs filling
• Originality?

Website

• Gallery isn't relevant-wouldn't see them sort of photos on a professional website
• Gallery is good, a very original idea

Teacher feedback

Trailer

• Less shots of girl tied up at begining and end
• Cut out shot where males identity is obvious
• Speak when tied up-'Why are you doing this?', 'I know who you are'
• See the film the girls are watching
• Leave at night
• Could be another character doing the kidnapping
• Better acting-more shots in the bedroom/angles
• More scenes-different locations
• Last scream needs to be longer
• Focus on main character when she screams at film so we know shes the main character
• We see her actually being kidnapped-quick shot

Poster

• Tagline
• Make the photo stand out more

Website

• About the film-actors, location, detail
• Pictures-main character-stills from film, scary, more/better stalker phots (leaf photo-more zoom, rearview-see eyes)
• Pictures-male and other characters
• Do more research